Focus group questionnaire

For the first questions i asked how they think Lindsey comes across as a character, and the  answers i got was that she is a suspicious charcter who likes to keep herself to herself, but likes to know whats going on. This is what i wanted people to think of Lindsey so this shows me that i am presenting her character well. The second question i asked was how can Kate's personality stand out more. My answers for this are quite similar they are, introduce her to more people, bring her relationship out earlier, and talk about her past. This gives me a clear idea of how i can add to Kate's relationship to make it stand out, the main thing being bring her  out to more characters. The third question was about my theme i asked if there was enough suspicion and mystery everyone answered yes, but someone made a suggestion that i could have the neighbor whisper something whilst she is staring at them. This shows me that there is enough but that small idea could be added. The fourth question i asked was who's character they think should stand out more and here i got a mixture of answers: Jessica, Steve, and Amanda. Amanda was mentioned the most so this tells me that i should make her character stand out more than the others. The last question i asked was if it's clear who Jessica is and the answers i got are yes it is clear who she is but she could be brought into conversations more. This tells me that i am doing well with presenting the character of Jessica but i could bring her into more conversations.